There are far too many spelling and grammar errors. I love the comments, but let's shape up our commentary. I would like a little more formal usage and structure in future blogs... Good work so far..
analyzing the story a tiger in the house is not that bad thanks that is a short story. the foil character in this story is the grandfather his definitely the one because the story goes around him even when he is not a shikari or a hunter. for me his conflict was thinking or believing that the tiger in the zoo was his old friend and it wasn't.Grandfather don't want to accept that timothy was dead and he express that when he give a scornful look to the keeper and walk briskly out of the zoo.the plot is base on the hunt for tigers and how hard is to see or capture one. Jose Espada
the second story the boy without a flag was to long jajaja but it was awesome .the story is a narrative and the foil character for me was his father because the kid was completely influence by him. the teachers miss colon, mr rios and miss marti they all have this respect for the flag and for america but in special mr rios .the kid have this conflict of what he really thinks and what he really want to defend but at the end his father just create an external ,internal conflict because he put the ideas on his mind and now he get betrayal by his own father and he don't understand why until the end.
the plot was how everyone wants to make you do things that they want you to do like believe in this or just believe in this no more options for you .another great story a lot of effort and passion put on this one just amazing how a person even when they are younger than you ,but with the right knowledge can make you feel ignorant and stupid, Jose Espada i forget to put my name on the other one sorry prof but this is the other part of the boy without a flag
analyzing the story a tiger in the house is not that bad thanks that is a short story. the foil character in this story is the grandfather his definitely the one because the story goes around him even when he is not a shikari or a hunter. for me his conflict was thinking or believing that the tiger in the zoo was his old friend and it wasn't.Grandfather don't want to accept that timothy was dead and he express that when he give a scornful look to the keeper and walk briskly out of the zoo.the plot is base on the hunt for tigers and how hard is to see or capture one. Jose Espada
ReplyDeletethe second story the boy without a flag was to long jajaja but it was awesome .the story is a narrative and the foil character for me was his father because the kid was completely influence by him. the teachers miss colon, mr rios and miss marti they all have this respect for the flag and for america but in special mr rios .the kid have this conflict of what he really thinks and what he really want to defend but at the end his father just create an external ,internal conflict because he put the ideas on his mind and now he get betrayal by his own father and he don't understand why until the end.
ReplyDeletethe plot was how everyone wants to make you do things that they want you to do like believe in this or just believe in this no more options for you .another great story a lot of effort and passion put on this one just amazing how a person even when they are younger than you ,but with the right knowledge can make you feel ignorant and stupid, Jose Espada i forget to put my name on the other one sorry prof but this is the other part of the boy without a flag
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